Wraithbait

Very powerful. There aren't enough stories out there that show Teyla's skills in combat - she's pretty lethal and I think that while she loathes killing, she will do it to protect herself and those she cares about. You portrayed her excellently in this story; it was moving and it made me hurt for all three of them, but Teyla especially. Let's hoping John can make her better.

i really like that one ha you know she could beat that guy

Very powerful, atmospheric fic here. Dark and twisted, so painful, but beautiful.

Excellent, hands down.

An interesting take on Teyla. I like the way you develop the atmosphere in this and the protection of John (did I miss why he wasn't fighting?). However, I didn't think that Rodney was 100% in character. Good stuff though - liked it.