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wow, i really enjoyed this. i really liked the way you did ronon's POV, it really sounded like him. and the love scene was excellent, it's rare that i find het love scenes that seem so intimate and real rather than harlequin like. great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoy Elizabeth and Ronon together, and hoped I could get across some of the reasons why. And to know I avoided Harlequin prose means a whole lot - that's definitely a style I try to avoid!

Ronon/Elizabeth just the way I like them. Thank you for this fic which is a really good illustration of the pairing.

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you so much for reading.

I admit that this pairing intrigues me on a weird leve, so seeing it portrayed with a measure of accuracy and respect-- while still remaining true to character-- was nice. Wonderfully written, and I like that you're using present tense. It's not utilized nearly enough in fiction. Also? Thank you god for believable dialogue.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Excellent, excellent!! More, please.

Author's Response: Thank you - I meant this to stand alone and I've yet to be inspired toward a continuation.

Awesome! Loved how descriptive it was. Hope you'll join my Weir/Ronon Fever yahoo group. If you've got any question you can get me at donnalynn@darkangelsfanfic.com

Author's Response: Thank you for reading.

Loved it. The slow build up of the sexual tension between them. Ronon's confusion at the ways of the "Earthlings" and the HOT sex afterwards.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it.