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Reviewer: margarks (Signed)
02 Apr 2007 7:34 pm
wow, i really enjoyed this. i really liked the way you did ronon's POV, it really sounded like him. and the love scene was excellent, it's rare that i find het love scenes that seem so intimate and real rather than harlequin like. great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoy Elizabeth and Ronon together, and hoped I could get across some of the reasons why. And to know I avoided Harlequin prose means a whole lot - that's definitely a style I try to avoid!
Reviewer: Keegan (Signed)
19 Sep 2006 5:15 pm
Ronon/Elizabeth just the way I like them. Thank you for this fic which is a really good illustration of the pairing.

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: Eisenkreis (Anonymous)
25 Apr 2006 5:51 am
I admit that this pairing intrigues me on a weird leve, so seeing it portrayed with a measure of accuracy and respect-- while still remaining true to character-- was nice. Wonderfully written, and I like that you're using present tense. It's not utilized nearly enough in fiction. Also? Thank you god for believable dialogue.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Leslie (Anonymous)
16 Apr 2006 4:17 pm
Excellent, excellent!! More, please.

Author's Response: Thank you - I meant this to stand alone and I've yet to be inspired toward a continuation.
Reviewer: Donna Lynn (Anonymous)
08 Apr 2006 4:03 am
Awesome! Loved how descriptive it was. Hope you'll join my Weir/Ronon Fever yahoo group. If you've got any question you can get me at

Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Monkey (Anonymous)
06 Apr 2006 8:01 pm
Loved it. The slow build up of the sexual tension between them. Ronon's confusion at the ways of the "Earthlings" and the HOT sex afterwards.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it.