Both POV are really nice! Good characterisation and I really liked the title. Don't know why, it's just a great title, keeps it in tone.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like the title as well. Cash rocks. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. JJ
Reviews For I Hurt Myself Today
Reviewer: Pranksta (Signed)
11 Apr 2006 2:51 pm
Two - McKay's POV
Reviewer: Lolle (Anonymous)
10 Apr 2006 3:51 am
OMG! You can't leave it here! You should really do a sequel or something! This was Well written and powerful. Loved it!
Please tell me you'll write more.
Author's Response: Hi, Lolle. Thanks! I am going to attempt a chapter 2. Thanks for the review! JJ
Author's Response: Hi, Lolle. Thanks! I am going to attempt a chapter 2. Thanks for the review! JJ
One - John's POV