Reviews For Coveting Neighbours
Oh, I approve. A very pleasant read. Not nearly enough attention has been paid to this.
Reviewer: Haggy (Anonymous)
16 Apr 2006 8:47 pm
I really enjoyed this story :)
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
14 Apr 2006 9:16 pm
Awww, that was great! Thanks!
Cute, I liked the ending. Sneaky McKay was awesome, hee. Interesting way of getting the boys together. Laughed at Ronon patting him down. Ooh and the scene where they threaten to drown the guy, that was amazing. *grins* *waves*
Very enjoyable story. Kolya's always a reliable baddie, because we know how personal things are between him and John and Rodney and how ruthless he is when he wants something. You got those aspects right, as well as the Rodney-snark to hide the worry and his conviction that John would come for him. I also liked the questioning of the prisoner, Ronon stalking about and John just as menacing despite his relaxed pose. Plus, you started the fic with a shower scene...so hot and a great beginning. Shower scenes can never be bad :). The ending was sweet, Rodney safe again and John climbing into the bed with him. Awww. Laura.