Reviews For Pillow Talk
What I really liked about this piece was the evolution of the relationship as seen through (mostly) the things that Rodney says during sex. You created some powerful images with just a few words as well--extremely well done!!
aw man, this was really perfect. the rate of preogression was very real and human, it didn't seem rushed or drawn out... just natural. and you have their characters down, for sure. great fic. AND HOTTT
=^^= The end was funny!! And the rest was great! Yours GB
Reviewer: Sg-16 (Anonymous)
15 Nov 2006 12:38 pm
oh wow, absolutely amazing i like how rodney's babbling ties into the plot and its hottt too, nice plus =]
Hell yeah that's cool. So love how you wove this fic. It's just so flawed and human and needy and... them. You've got their voices and personalities down pat, m'dear. ----}-@
Lovely story. I loved the gradual progression of both the relationship, and John listening to what Rodney was babbling. Hot too :). Laura.
Reviewer: Akro (Anonymous)
17 Apr 2006 8:53 am