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Reviewer: Dom [dfbbear58@yahoo.com] (Anonymous)
06 May 2006 11:20 am
This whole series has been wonderful, as a gay man reading Daniel’s words was both touching and heart wrenching. Thank you for putting down in such an eloquent way that no matter who we love, it’s being in love by anyone that is so important no matter what gender.

Author's Response: You're right--it is loving someone, and being loved, that is important, not gender or race or age or anything else. That really is what this series is about.
Part 11 - Outed
Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous)
27 Apr 2006 6:27 am
This is a facinating story. I love that we don't know what is happening yet, and how we are finding out little things at at time. I can't wait to see more of this.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) More to come very soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: Coyote Blue (Anonymous)
26 Apr 2006 12:50 am
Wonderful, fabulous, intriguing, captivating - more please thank you!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) More to come very soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: jgroovydaisy (Anonymous)
25 Apr 2006 7:39 pm
I like how all the different ideas are coming together. I am looking forward to a Daniel/Zelenka hook-up. :) I am enjoying that this story keeps moving in directions I haven't figured out yet. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) More to come soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: DragonLady (Signed)
25 Apr 2006 5:46 pm
I have to say that this story is beyond awesome! =) I love the way you're integrating SG-1 into the Atlantis world and keeping everyone so in character despite the bizarre circumstances. Plus, the whole concept is just cool. Eagerly awaiting more! =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) More to come very soon.
Part 1 - The Death of Atlantis
Reviewer: torturedangel (Signed)
25 Apr 2006 2:44 pm
weird! on the whole fathered child that hasnt come into exsitance yet bit. Wickedly good story and I want more soon, plz :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :) More to come very soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: berlinghoff (Anonymous)
25 Apr 2006 12:46 pm
Time Travel! Time Travel! Time Travel! SQUEEEEEEEE! Yeah... I loooove Time Travel(hence the capitals)! I really like your story, 'cause there's slashy goodness, and Time Travel, and a little Colonel Carter bashing (though not too much because I love all my Stargaters..Stargate people..uhm..you know the people who live in the Stargate universe), and Time Travel, and Kavanagh is not an asshole (I think), and lovely writing (yeah I love your dialogue, and your scientific&non-scientific backstory, and character moments,...), and so much more. Ooh my spidey-sense is tingling: Will there be major(or minor) Radek-angsting? Do you know how long this story will be, because I see the potential for ..uhm..let's say.. at least 30 to 300 more chapters?!?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) The story is still in progress, so I'm not certain exactly how long it will be, although I can guarantee you there is *much* more to come. You can definately look forward to angst from a number of characters, as well, including Radek, who has a major part to play ahead in the story.
Part 1 - The Death of Atlantis
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
25 Apr 2006 11:11 am
wow! cool! they're in the past! I thought they might be in a future where the Ori had taken over our galaxy, glad I was wrong, this is way cooler hehehe reading on....

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :)
Part 7 - A Point In Time
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Apr 2006 5:22 am
Intriguing chapter. I liked how the jumper automatically translated. Does it do that for everyone, or just those with the gene, I wonder? And how did it know so much about Radek? Can it identify others and give so much information about them? And what does this information about Radek having a daughter mean? So many questions;I'm looking forward to getting a few answers. Laura.

Author's Response: They'll begin to put things together shortly to start answering some of the questions. :)
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
24 Apr 2006 10:18 pm
wow! cool! they're in the past! I thought they might be in a future where the Ori had taken over our galaxy, glad I was wrong, this is way cooler hehehe reading on....

Author's Response: Glad you like it. :)
Part 7 - A Point In Time
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 10:10 pm
Wow. WTF's going on here? I'm just as confused as they are. And John and Rodney definitely need to tell Carson about the medical scaner in the HUD, hrm? Maybe find out where there might be medical equipment and medicines... Why do I have this weird feeling that they're in some sort of illusion? 'Cause it's almost like the city's been made to cater to whatever sentient life form with the gene. Also, I'm glad there weren't any fatalities, although I sure hope there aren't any lingering injuries that haven't been diagnosed yet. Eagerly looking forward to more, hon. ----}-@

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. :) They will start putting some of the pieces together very soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 9:25 pm
I loved this chapter, seeing how well Daniel and Radek got on, how they connected over the loss of their spouse, the speaking in Czech and Radek's fascination with how Daniel got so absorbed in his topic of conversation. An interesting pairing, but a good one. Laura.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :) This chapter showed me the importance of a very good beta reader--Lady Anne made suggestions that vastly improved this initial scene between Radek and Daniel.
Part 8 - Lost and Found
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 9:08 pm
This is a really intriguing predicament and I can't wait to see where it goes. I liked the end scene between John and Rodney- very sweet. I also liked John's reassuring touches during the revelation about where they were, and other character stuff such as Sam and Daniel's reactions to having Vala assigned to work with them. Laura.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the character moments. There is more to come. :)
Part 7 - A Point In Time
Reviewer: ceitie (Anonymous)
24 Apr 2006 8:58 pm
I'm loving this story, especially the quotes you chose, all of which are awesome. Great character interaction, especially in scenes with lots of people, like in the planeterium, which are difficult to write coherently. You have a great mystery going on here, although I'm beginning to put together threads of it, and I'm just waiting for someone to make the obvious suggestion about why they haven't found any Ancients yet... :) Also, whenever you mention the stones in the city, I can't help but think: the Emerald City! Please post again soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Good catch on the Emerald City--you're the first person who has mentioned they noticed that. :) There is more to come soon.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 8:47 pm
*blink*...Wow, that's some statement to end this chapter on! Loved the build up, Carter and Kavanagh putting their cases and Rodney impatiently hurrying them on. What does this all mean for our intrepid team? Are there any Ancients still there? Worse, any Ori? Laura.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the build up. :) All the answers are coming by the end of the story.
Part 6 - Oh, We Absolutely Should Not Be Here
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 8:35 pm
Great chapter. I loved the tension, how everyone automatically felt inclined to accept Sam over Kavanagh, how they all argued their case. And then there was Rodney, swayed enough by Kavanagh's suicide mission warning and unwilling to risk John on anything he's not looked over himself first. I'm a little disappointed in Elizabeth for keeping quiet here, but happy that Caldwell's giving Rodney the time to check the data. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it. It was difficult to know what to do with Elizabeth here. She's had such a unique history with Kavanagh that I just couldn't imagine her agreeing with him on anything willingly.
Part 5 - Kav and Carter
Reviewer: Khyrra (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 8:03 pm
Very nice so far, I'm definitley intrigued. Dusana's Radek's mother's name, huh? I wonder who's mother's name Claire could be...*grin* I'm really interested to see how this is all explained. I have my hunches, but I'll wait to find out if I'm even close.

Author's Response: I do wonder whose mother's name that might be?--if it is someone's mother's name, that is. :) I've had great fun scattering clues throughout the chapters--quite a few of which might even carry more than one hint as to what is actually going on.
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: lily_cat (Anonymous)
24 Apr 2006 7:58 pm
Great chapters, can't wait till you up-date !

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. More to come soon. :)
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: Sandra (Anonymous)
24 Apr 2006 6:57 pm
This story makes no sense so far, but it sure is fun!

Author's Response: I'm glad it's fun. :) And I promise it will make sense by the end. :) All the odd things they are finding on this world are there for a very specific reason. I have to admit I'm a big fan of the tv show Lost, and I couldn't resist putting the Atlantis and SG1 crews into something of that kind of mysterious environment. More to come soon. :)
Part 9 - A Puddlejumper Ride
Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
24 Apr 2006 5:44 pm
Oy frickin vey. Novak's right... this's so not good. *bites nails nervously* ----}-@

Author's Response: Don't bite your nails down too short--there is much more to come.
Part 6 - Oh, We Absolutely Should Not Be Here
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