Very nicely done. I've always thought that automatically assuming our own social and family structures would be the norm everywhere would be a little naive. I like the interaction you show between the three people in this relationship.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed it :)
I thought it was important to get Teyla's POV across in terms of the nature of the relationship and how it would fit into Athosian culture, so I'm glad you liked that part.
I wrote this for the Live Journal community called Atlantean_Three if you want to check it out - there are more stories with these three characters there. The link is http://community.livejournal.com/atlantean_three/
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Reviewer: Soledad (Anonymous)
30 Apr 2006 5:01 am