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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 May 2006 8:22 pm
Ooh, angry!sex. Yum :). Very nice. It seems so typical that Rodney's mouth got them into trouble but John suffered the consequences, and then Rodney avoided him. I'm glad John didn't let it go and confronted him. I'm also glad the confrontation took place somewhere private *g*. Very hot. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Rodney can't seem to keep his mouth shut, but it all worked out nicely in the end ;)
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Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
03 May 2006 2:38 pm
Interesting play w/ the title...cute. Nice and hot short story. Just an FYI: you have John yelling for his team to get to the 'jumper, yet you have them in essence, 'walking/stumbling' through the gate moments later...if they had the jumper, Rodney would fly it right? Hope this FYI don't upset, you I actually laughed, but I didn't think you meant it to be funny. Thanks for the hot read!

Author's Response: oops, I thought I fixed that. I was distracted by Puddlejumper!Sex and hence the slip-up. I'll fix it :) Thanks - glad you liked it!
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