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Reviewer: starhorse (Anonymous)
20 Feb 2008 10:27 pm
When are you going to finish the story?
Chapter 1
Reviewer: angelwings (Anonymous)
12 May 2006 12:10 am
this has the making of a realy good story... however, is Sheppard Major or Colonel, you seam a bit confussed, and it is pulling me out of the moment! i need to be in the moment to properly enjoy your story- far excelent tho!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry about the rank thing. He is a Colonel, so I'll change that accordingly. Glad youe enjoying the story so far
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
11 May 2006 10:13 pm
I'm glad Rodney and Aiden have woken and we've gotten at least a little of the story. It's all still very worrying though. Just who has John and what do they want from him? Just a small problem with this chapter- you keep switching between major and colonel throughout, almost every paragraph. It would help with reading this if you changed all the incorrect rankings. Laura.

Author's Response: Sorry about the rank thing. He is a Colonel so I'll change it accordingly
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
09 May 2006 7:58 pm
*Eep* What's John got himself into this time? Laura.
Chapter 2