Reviews For Forgiveness

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Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous)
27 Aug 2006 1:56 am
Great drugged and seeing dead people story. Rodney's confusion and dream sequences came across well.
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
10 May 2006 6:45 am
Yeah, that is fucked up. And I'm a little shaken by the whole snowing thing... it threw me out of the whole thing, actually. At first I thought it was more of Rodney hallucinating, but then you had John joining him. Has me going WTF, dude? Is there more? I hope so. ----}-@

Author's Response: Interesting point. My idea was that, since this story is from Rodney's POV, we're seeing the snow through his eyes. Even at the end there, where they both stood and watched the snow - that's seen via Rodney. So is the snow actually there?

Author's Response: Oh, I see it now - I left a line in that I'd intended to remove. Oy! Thank you. I've fixed it.
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Pranksta (Anonymous)
09 May 2006 5:08 pm
Wow, wasn't that unexpected! My heart was beating a bit too fast there! How very very nicely done. Really wasn't expecting anything like that to happen! It deserves a 'guh' of surprise, amongst other much more complementary things.

Author's Response: Oh, good!
Chapter 2
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
09 May 2006 3:21 am
Excellent start! Wow, very creepy! Poor Rodney :( Love it! More please!

Author's Response: I'm all about the creepy!
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
08 May 2006 10:03 pm
Wow. Just... wow. I can't wait to see where you take this. One of the reasons is because I'm a Rodney-whumpaholic. ;) Excellent beginning... and I'm left wondering how much of what happened so far is actually real. ----}-@
Chapter 1