Wraithbait

Thoroughly enjoyed reading all 3 chapters - keep the stories coming! (Especially if they feature everyones favorite - John S.) I wish I could write like this!

Very nicely done. I must admit, I was hoping the rest of the story would go quicker so I could get to the shippy part, but that's just sleeplessness & impatience, so ignore me!! Overall, good job!

I really enjoyed this story. The character's POV was very well written, and I loved the whole silhouette idea in the final chapter. The whumpage on Shep was also good, and his relationship with Elizabeth was very cute. Totally believable too! I even liked the friendship you created between him and the nurse. I liked that revenge scene you implied toward the end about the whole 'bed bath from Nell' too. That was a nice touch, and full of good humor! The medical jargon was awesome, and very realistic and entertaining. I hope to see more stories from you soon! Bravo!!!