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Reviewer: mysh (Anonymous)
19 Jun 2005 12:22 am
generally I like it. Only thing is, it needs to be edited. The spelling of Goa'uld ( I imagine ) is wrong (It's after the third stars when they first meet the Egyptian looking people), and right underneath it is a paragraph which repeats twice. Hope I was of some help! Keep writing :D
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