Reviews For Submission
Reviewer: centim (Anonymous)
17 May 2006 9:14 am
wow, how very visual! I liked the fact that you gave it an athmosphere of "they've done this before", because this makes it far more realistical how incredibly quickly teyla could insert her knuckles. so, even though this is so not my favourite pairing, I love the story very much and hope you'll one day write a fiction where rodney (or any other character of your choice) fists any of the women. this would be really great ;) love this, centim (firstname.lastname@example.org)
Oh...my. Hit my kink square on the head, why don't you? I love the idea of a submissive Ronon, who wants to be tied but stays still even when he isn't. Just...wow.