This was really good. I like your choice to use the second person...it almost gives a confessional air to the story, as though John is speaking out loud and needing to use the second person to distance himself from such intimate feelings.
Your prose is very tight and clear, and you do a great job getting inside John's head. This sounds very true to the character I know.
Reviews For Rumors and Speculations
Reviewer: Spider (Anonymous)
06 Oct 2007 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Starwind (Anonymous)
19 May 2006 5:43 pm
Oh this is good. This is pretty much the way I see the the relationships as they stand right now (ship preferences notwithstanding 8D).
Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingone (Anonymous)
19 May 2006 1:38 pm
Oh this was/is good. I love it. The ending with Ronon is just a great touch too.