Reviews For Withdrawal

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Reviewer: twinchaosblade (Signed)
25 Jul 2007 5:40 am
Hehe, nice twist at the end! Although I doubt his addiction would go *that* far, or they would resort to such drastic means. But the story was good.

Author's Response: This was my first attempt at humor, so I hope I did well. I've been in a writing slump for over a year now, but hopefully I will have more stories posted soon. Thanks for reading! -Kat
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
21 May 2006 6:07 am
*flails* OMFG, that's just too precious! ROTFLMFAO And hell, Rodney should've thrown something... like one of those suture pans... at John for that tactless remark. *shakes head* Caffeine addiction of that caliber is nothing to sneeze at. *tries to look serious, but fails miserably* Thanks for the laugh, m'dear. ----}-@

Author's Response: Personally, I would have thrown a bedpan. The only contact I have with a caffine addiction of this magnitude is my dad - I based the story on what would happen if he stopped drinking coffee. Oh, the horrors that come to mind! Thanks for reviewing! -Kat
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Reviewer: DaVinci's Girl (Anonymous)
20 May 2006 10:28 pm
It's cute. Editing the punchline typo (coffee addition) with help with the joke.

Author's Response: Whoops! That's what I get for having my dad beta (King of the spellchecker!) and for my first crack at humor. Thanks for reviewing! -Kat
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