Reviews For Rest

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Reviewer: Sadie (Anonymous)
21 Mar 2009 3:39 pm
I've read stories with John as Sub and Dom, and stories with Carson as Sub and Dom - sometimes with each other. I don't seem to have a problem visualizing John in either roll, but until now I've a great deal of difficulty seeing Carson as a Dom. Your story reminds that Doms and Subs come in all shapes and sizes - physically, emotionally and mentally. It reminds me that even though Carson is shown as timid when it comes to Ancient tech he is also shown as very much in charge in his element.

Thank you.

Author's Response: thanks for taking time to read :) ~H~
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Reviewer: Miso no Tsuki (Signed)
29 May 2006 5:04 pm
Intriguing. Mostly because it's hard to see Carson as the Dom when the medical side would be taking over. Oddly enough this works very well here, and I don't normally enjoy BDSM stuff.So thank you! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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Reviewer: avira_jaden (Signed)
28 May 2006 4:43 pm
I'm curious to know how Sheppard and Beckett got to that point in their relationship. I like the submission on John's side, as well as Carson's thoughts/tenderness towards the end. I would have liked to know more of John's thoughts about his position in their relationship, but your story flowed really well, *grins*, so that isn't a complaint against you. The title fits well into John's feelings of exhaustion, because, Carson is like, his relaxation, even if he can't literally *relax*. Good job. ~Av

Author's Response: ::grins:: when I submitted this story first to the Wraithbait yahoo list it was a guess who John's Master is and it didn't have a title. Leah called it Rest and I'm over the moon that you think it suits :) Thank you for taking the time to read my little PWP
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
28 May 2006 11:12 am
I read this on list, but liked it so much that I took another look. It stands up to a second read. i especially love Carson's thoughts at the end, about just why John needs this punishment- to make him realise that he's not just a tool to be used in the defence of Atlantis, but a person. Very nice. Laura.

Author's Response: I'm amazed but honoured that you would take the time to read this again. Thank you.
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Reviewer: pgnpxi (Anonymous)
28 May 2006 9:06 am
Pretty! OMG so pretty! Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thank you :)
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