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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
23 Mar 2005 2:07 am
How cool was this? I laughed at the 'water' pistol mayhem, and then had to fan my brain to cool it down once John and Rodney made it to some privacy and a bed! The morning after was good, I really felt John's guilt and pain when he realised that Rodney didn't remember, and then seemed very unhappy about it. I'm glad to see they figured it out in the end though. I felt sorry for Carson feeling awkward over Grodin, but I have to admit to not much sympathy for Kavanaugh getting a good beating from Simpson *veg*. The whole issue of Atlantis knowing about what her inhabitants need was interesting, and a little disturbing; especially as she seems particularly atuned to John. I look forward to the sequel you mention and hope you will explore the connection between Atlantis and John more. And, of course, there's still stress relief needed ;D. Laura.

Author's Response: I plan to, hon. :) This is gonna be an exploation indeed... ;)

Author's Response: heh... *exploration*... :)
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Reviewer: Fledge (Anonymous)
06 Mar 2005 7:34 pm
This is cool! Very funny and I love that the city is so good at anticipating everyone's needs - especially John's. Shame these humans have such silly hangups compared to the Ancients ;) Looking forward to further instalments!

Author's Response: There's a whole lot of this left to be written... the possiblities are nearly endless! E.M.S. (Emergency Mood Stabilizers) is currently in the works as a sequel... The city will play an even bigger (and some might say creepier) role in the installments to come... :)
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Reviewer: Cynical_Coat (Anonymous)
03 Mar 2005 11:17 pm
Never fear, more is on the way! Thanks for the fb!

Author's Response: And *now* I figure out how the respond feature works... *rolls eyes*
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Reviewer: Mae (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2005 9:15 pm
You cant leave it at that. Please more. I'm gonna turn 18 on the 11th so it can be a b-day present. (Note to self: use that line on Klinoa, the girl who writes "Miracle" slash.)
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Reviewer: Switch (Signed)
20 Feb 2005 5:42 pm
Even better than chapter one *g* Bring on three! *pickets*
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Reviewer: Switch (Signed)
20 Feb 2005 5:31 pm
*squee* Loving the idea! Can't wait to read part duex >:o)
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Reviewer: Mae (Anonymous)
17 Feb 2005 10:30 pm
that has got to be one of the funniet stories I have ever read. I want more please.
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Reviewer: ikswo (Anonymous)
16 Feb 2005 10:39 pm
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