Reviews For In His Eyes

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Reviewer: Kat (Anonymous)
07 Oct 2008 2:07 am
This has a lot of potential! Good plot, plausible character interactions. The only thing is that it feels a bit...squished. THis could be a truly beautiful story if you could stretch it out a bit; more details and and filler. Great job!! ^,^
Plans go Wrong
Reviewer: kamelion (Anonymous)
03 Jun 2006 1:53 am
You know, this would make a wonderful full-out story. *hint hint* :D Like the way you wrote Rodney's blank reaction!
Plans go Wrong