Reviews For Breathe
Reviewer: ladyjanus (Signed)
06 Jul 2010 7:31 pm
This is good. I can't find any wasted words at all. And I like the way the meter of the sentence structure - the stops and starts and the ramble - reflects Rodney's emotions. This is really nice work...
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Reviewer: diannelamerc (Signed)
05 Jun 2006 5:40 am
Ow... Well done.
Author's Response: Ow indeed... Poor them! Thank you :)
Author's Response: Ow indeed... Poor them! Thank you :)
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Reviewer: Jack_rocks (Signed)
05 Jun 2006 1:32 am
Aww..so touching. Very beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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Reviewer: Liz Bradford (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2006 1:31 pm
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you, honey!
Author's Response: Thank you, honey!
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