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Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous)
09 Sep 2006 11:47 pm
What a lovely job you did with this story! I really like how wrote the progression of realization for John and I love, love, love that romantic ending! Well done - thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D This fic, I admit, is probably one of my favorites among the stories that I've written. *pets John*
Reviewer: timebound (Anonymous)
08 Jun 2006 3:19 am
Squeeeeeeee!!! I love this fic to pieces. It's so simple, yet says so much! *loves Shep/Weir*

Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! :D
Reviewer: Tiffanie K. (Anonymous)
08 Jun 2006 1:35 am
That's a great story. It was beautiful and sweet w/out being super cheesy. You did a great job of putting together key moments of realization for John w/ key moments in the show that we shippers already acknowledge as important moments in their relationship. It was really well written. And thank you for not ruining it by feeling the need to add graphic details. You know what I mean by graphic details.

Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review, Tiffanie. I'm glad you liked the moments I collected for this brief ficlet. And as for the graphic details, well as much fun as that would have been, they weren't really necessary for the story. I detailed each of the moments, but I still left some aspects a little vague. It's meant to be like a series of snapshots. Anything more detailed wouldn't have gone well with the flow I was trying to maintain. I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks again! :)