Reviews For Contrition
Mixed feelings from this one. On the one hand, mmm hot :); on the other, it was sad that this was all Elizabeth could get from the only two men she could look at. But on yet another hand (hmmm, I must be an alien), it was also kinda disturbing and made me a little angry that she was invading their privacy like that. And all this in so few words! Laura.
07 Jun 2006 11:29 pm
Concise and well crafted, your description shows us how this would surely be. Unless of course you chose to go back and make it a threesome!
Reviewer: angelwings (Anonymous)
07 Jun 2006 10:11 pm
well thats mildly disturbing, in a good way. poor lizzy, guess she should have struck while the iron was hot, silly woman!!