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Reviewer: go suck on a lemon (Signed)
16 Mar 2008 8:25 pm
Yay! Such a good piece, loved every minute. XD
The One With the Fight (5/5)
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
22 Feb 2008 2:57 am
The ins and outs of relationships. Very well down, but I really wanted the marine tossed off a pier.
The One With the Fight (5/5)
Reviewer: Wordwitch (Anonymous)
28 Oct 2006 11:49 pm
I think SciFiFreak is correct. This sequence, despite its lovely plot and charactrisations, is unfinished. Lewis, for example, is both unexplained and undisciplined. FIX the city!!!

Author's Response: Do you mean Harris? (The 1LT in part 5?) SciFiFreak wanted me to elaborate on him, but logically there's no way to do so within the framework of the story. People do ill-advised things, especially when already simmering close to a boil. Harris had already had a run-in with McKay earlier in the day, and would never have even landed the Atlantis posting without familial pressure being applied (Legacy officer is slang for someone who attends the USAFA who had a USAF Officer parent). And, if you'll look at the piece this was based off of, all three men involved in the altercation were sent back to Earth with the /Daedalus/. Keep in mind, as is the case in most assault cases, unless Parrish is willing to press charges and/or at least make an accurate statement they actually /can't/ take formal disciplinary action. Kicking them out of the city is the best Sheppard can do, and given the timing (With the /Daedalus/ departing in only a few days) it's easier to just send them off than keep them around to unofficially 'teach them a lesson.'
The One With the Fight (5/5)
Reviewer: lilu (Anonymous)
09 Jun 2006 4:54 am
Please continue, for some reason i have a particular love for this pairing - maybe it is the artistic license, but whatever it is, you need to feed my habit. Write quickly! (oh and Well Done BTW :)

Author's Response: *G* Thanks! There's actually another chapter stuck in the admin-review queue. It should hopefully be clearing through sometime tonight. Enjoy!!
The One With the Bleach
Reviewer: Rdcalow (Anonymous)
08 Jun 2006 3:17 pm
What is nice is this is an unknown quantity.. Nick Lorne (I hope that add that first name to canon)and David Parrish.. Two men who obviously have to have a good long chat.. can't wait! We'll get to learn about other perspectives. Keep up the great creative work and I hope to read much much more!

Author's Response: *Blushes* Thanks! You're completely right in that Parrish/Lorne is loved almost for the lack of canon information; it gives us author-types room to play about more.
The One With the Bleach
Reviewer: annajo (Anonymous)
08 Jun 2006 12:21 pm
Excellent!!! can't wait for the next bit. I Love this pairing!!!! Thanks

Author's Response: *G* Hope I don't let you down!
The One With the Bleach