Reviews For Nephelai

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Reviewer: allthat (Signed)
08 May 2010 3:29 pm
I hope you finish this story some day! It's really good, and I'm dying to know how it ends. :)
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Reviewer: Aqualegia (Signed)
22 Apr 2010 6:43 pm
I've enjoyed the story so far... please can we have some more :)
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Reviewer: karen blue (Anonymous)
06 Nov 2009 1:51 am
really great story, I couldn't stop reading it, I laughed and I cried. When can I read more?
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Reviewer: christella (Anonymous)
09 Aug 2009 12:55 am
it is a shame you never finished this story,definitely one of the better pieces of fiction on wraithbait.nice suprise in rodney pining and john oblivious rather than other way around.
Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
10 Mar 2009 2:42 am
I can so picture this! "Ronon had told him that the first time he'd found Rodney face down on his bed he'd thought he was dead for a few seconds. The scientist didn't think that fully justified being shaken awake so vigorously that he'd almost made it out of his door in just his boxer shorts because he thought they were under attack."

Tell me you are going to complete's wonderful! Thanks for what you have given thus far.
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Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
10 Mar 2009 1:29 am
Oh no!
Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
09 Mar 2009 11:49 pm
I love this: "Annoyed and frustrated by the warrior's lack of answers, Lieutenant Colonel John Sheppard, ranking military officer of the Atlantis expedition, produced a move that demonstrated the off the wall thinking and tactical genius that made him such a dangerous adversary.

He sat down."
Reviewer: Tzzzz (Anonymous)
29 Jan 2009 7:19 am
I've read the parts you've posted several times and I really want more. Please let me know that you'll update.

Author's Response: Real Life is tough a the moment. I hope to write more when I can. Sorry to keep you on the hook.
Reviewer: Toni (Anonymous)
04 Oct 2008 1:25 am
Please miss, may I have some more?

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of chapters. I hope to write more as soon as RL permits

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of chapters. I hope to write more as soon as RL permits

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of chapters. I hope to write more as soon as RL permits
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
04 May 2008 2:54 am
I'm so nervous about what is going to go wrong. And if it's been days that they've been on the planet, where is the rescue party? Lorne should be flying search patterns over the area.

I'm greatly enjoying the fic. As I usually do with your stories :). Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. I'm so sorry I didn't see it before. RL is a bummer sometimes. I'll try to update soon.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
18 Apr 2008 10:50 pm
Glad to see them get through a chapter unscathed, if not unfrightened ;). Great Rodney pov, though I hope he's wrong about the feeling (I'm not holding my breath though). Loved the John/Rodney moments.


Author's Response: Thanks. I'm hoping to write more of them actually awake at the same time for the next chapter :-)
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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
14 Apr 2008 6:41 am
Arrrrgh!! Don't stop!!! Must have more, right now!! *stomps foot*

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying. I struggle to write with my RL work loud but I'm trying to be quicker.
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Reviewer: lavvyan (Signed)
08 Apr 2008 9:08 pm
*loves you muchly* What's this talk about kicking? All I did was... nudge. In a friendly way. ;)

Author's Response: I respond better to kicking :-)
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
08 Apr 2008 6:48 pm
I've had mold, but I never thought about fighting it with another type. Brilliantly done.

Author's Response: Ah, slime molds aren't really the same as pin molds as these guys are kind of mobile. Amazing creatures...if you can call them that. Glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: gail (Anonymous)
08 Apr 2008 6:23 pm
Lots of fun so far. Very entertaining chapter. Loved the Jungle Book.

If you get a minute the spelling / grammar blips are happening a bit more often in this chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. I'll go back and check this one. I try not to let too many slip through.
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
08 Apr 2008 4:17 pm
I was really enjoying the chapter, until I got to the cliffie.

It was evil in all the best ways.

Author's Response: I like a good cliff hanger. Hope it keeps your interest through the other chapters.
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
08 Apr 2008 4:10 pm
I love finding wonderful new stories - even if they are only new to me.

Great opening chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest
Reviewer: Alinea (Signed)
08 Apr 2008 3:11 pm
AT LAST!!!! thank you for carrying on with my all time favourite story. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really flattered it's your favorite. I shall try to write faster and finsh the next chapter.
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Reviewer: krysalys (Anonymous)
08 Apr 2008 4:39 am
I sure hope there's more of this soon. Wonderfully written. I'm kinda hoping that it's Rodney who gets whumped, but then I'm addicted to that very thing. Heh.

Author's Response: I'll try and write faster. I'm sure there'll be Rodney whumpage at some point :-)
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Reviewer: Silverthreads (Signed)
08 Apr 2008 3:07 am
Yay! Updated - and ew! Spider! Shudder!!!!

Author's Response: I cheered when I finished it too :-) Spiders are ick
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