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Reviewer: A Cat Called McKay (Anonymous)
24 Dec 2006 4:44 pm
such a sad story very good
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Reviewer: lavvyan (Signed)
18 Jun 2006 4:48 pm
aw, this is painful to read! and i love the way you have rodney wonder over his own numbness, because he would totally take his own reactions apart like that. very well done! :)
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Reviewer: bonita7 (Signed)
17 Jun 2006 3:02 am
Okay, first! And no one seemed to notice until weeks too late. No one realized how deep Rodney's feelings were. But Rodney knew something wasn't right. Those words repeated throughout the story just made the others not noticing more poignant. Very good. As for the lack of a beta, the only thing I caught was "The way he never let Sheppard’s dog tags out of his site." Site is a place. Sight is one of the five senses. I think you meant the later.
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Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
17 Jun 2006 3:01 am
*sobs incoherently*
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