Reviews For Eclipse
Reviewer: angelwings (Anonymous)
26 Jun 2006 4:02 pm
wow. that's so sweet and i think it really defines their relationship beauifully, i can just imagine it all developing like this. thanks for sharing.
Great look at Rodney's thoughts and how he can never really stop analysing things. I liked his changing reactions to John and thought that his initial thoughts- about how he would have messed up if he'd realised he and John were actually in a relationship- very in character. I'm glad he gradually came to realise that he retty much loved John back and wasn't interested in finding anyone else anymore :). Laura.
Lovely imagery and great Rodney POV. You've gotten into his head in a very believable way. Thanks
I like this a lot. Very sweet.
Reviewer: Karen /s (Anonymous)
25 Jun 2006 12:26 am
About the only thing I can say here is that I like it a lot. It's very Rodney and very John, which is a talented thing to do without any dialogue....