Reviews For Wrapped Up

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Jul 2006 1:28 pm
Great fic. The whole thing with the poisonous vines and Rodney to the rescue was a great beginning; tense and exciting and some good hurt for the comfort to follow after :). Speaking of the comfort, I liked how they started out innocently enough and Rodney gradually found it more and more difficult and, in typical Rodney fashion, decided that avoiding John would solve it. I'm glad John showed his own feelings before Rodney got the chance to flee. That was hot and also sweet, plus we got a bit of banter too *g*. Loved it. Laura.

Author's Response: I saw a posted picture of a guy tearing off his t-dhirt underneath a spray of water, and pretty much the whole fic popped into my head. *g* There's just something so soothing and senusal about back rubs, and it seemed like too much of a good opportunity to pass up to not have Rodney helping John get that cream where it belonged. And really, how could back rubs between those two not end in sex? *g* Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Denyce (Signed)
03 Jul 2006 5:18 pm
Oh Yum!! Very hot indeed!!! First you hooked me with the h/c, & ow! Then the comfort/care, with some serious sweet first-time yumminess into yummy hot porn. Yea I really enjoy ;-) thank you!

Author's Response: I saw a pic of a guy ripping off his t-shirt underneath a spray of water, and the fic was born. Not quite sure where the tentacle monster came from, though. *g* I'm glad you took the ride! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: LushBaby (Signed)
03 Jul 2006 4:29 pm
Very Creative way to get John's clothes off!! Lovely story--my favorite is the first time and you did a great job with both the characters and the hot monkey sex!!!! Yummy!

Author's Response: I got inspiration for the ripping-off-of-the-tshirt from a pic. *g* I do love first times, so seem to write a lot of them. I'm glad the characters seemed true to you! And I can't seem to help myself and keep away from writing smut. Thank's for letting me know you enjoyed it!