I really like the way consent was handled in this and the way the drug was a trigger but it didn't put them in an awkward place the morning after and Rodney knew to wait until John was in his right mind and had a choice.
Not that i dont enjoy aliens made them do it stories but this worked for me really well.
Reviews For Everything Except Temptation
Reviewer: Regis (Anonymous)
27 Jan 2010 3:07 am
Oh my. The sandwich is precious.
This truly is one of my favorite stories. The scenes between R and J are just hot, hot, hot and I love the image of R sitting like a watch dog outside the door all night. Great stuff!
x] This is gorgeous. I'd smite Leela, but it was through her endevours that they got together in the first place. Good characterisation, though, and a great plot ('What plot?' Lol.). To sum it up, your writing rocks and horrah for seduction and McShep.
Reviewer: ferret_kitty (Anonymous)
28 Dec 2006 2:36 am
Seriously, I love this story. I can only dream to write as well and as concisely as you do. *bows to your prowess*
Good one :)
Reviewer: sextagteam (Anonymous)
15 Jul 2006 6:02 am
Awesome fic, hot and sweet beyond the telling of it. I have so much love for "Aliens made them do it" as a genre and having them not... "do it" brought this really interesting emotional layer to it. Also, hot ;)
I very much enjoyed this interesting take on that fanfic classic, "Aliens Made Them Do It." In this case, they don't do it, in fact, and that's a lot to do with your spot-on characterization of John and the delicate balance between him and Rodney. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
07 Jul 2006 9:51 am
Aww, my favorite part is when John tells Rodney to never change. I loved this!
Reviewer: Rayne (Anonymous)
06 Jul 2006 11:27 pm
you probably lost a lot of calories…ah…that is…I wonder what they're serving...." He trails off. John smiles. "Seriously. Don't change." I liked the story...Rodney gaurding John like that..and not taking (too much) advantage. Talk about temptations...grin... I really liked the cuddling too. Thanks for sharing.
Excellent fic. I really felt John's struggle to keep control while the drug was just stripping it away. I liked Rodney's torn feelings; wanting to saty, but also wanting to go and leave John with some dignity. I loved his new fierce-without-words look and his whole dealing with Leela. It was a relief to know that Leela's father disapproved and wanted to make up for it with a trade agreement. I liked the aftermath, from Teyla and Ronon's anger to the sweet moments between John and Rodney, all mixed up amongst their usual banter. Hot and sweet ending too :). Laura.
Reviewer: Mysitc (Anonymous)
06 Jul 2006 9:06 pm
LOL...food taking second place...it has to be love. Great job! Loved this and loved how Rodney developed the new 'look'. Terrific!
Reviewer: centim (Anonymous)
06 Jul 2006 8:42 pm
this, is. wonderful!! loved it !! firstname.lastname@example.org