Reviews For Nil Desperandum
Reviewer: with_an_apostrophe (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2006 1:06 pm
Do not worry about Mary-Sueing (oh gosh, I can't believe I just did that to the English language!) yours wasn't obvious at all! Anyway, so much of ourselves (writers) goes into what we write that I believe we all Mary-Sue in some way whether it's blatant or subtle and whether we realise it or not. Good to hear from an original character - don't be shy of exploring them more!
Reviewer: angelwings (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2006 10:26 am
wow, great OC. it makes a really nice read to have a mission from anothers pov. it would be great to have a little bit of a scene at the SGC with bates- that would be really nice.