*L* Dang Lorne and Teyla for showing up when they did. :)
The water painting was incredibly erotic.
Reviews For Calligraphy
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
11 May 2007 10:38 pm
Phew. Too hot to even touch... poor boys. Nicely done.
Reviewer: poisonshock (Anonymous)
16 Jul 2006 11:22 pm
that was really really *hot*! ;)
13 Jul 2006 7:50 pm
This was just wonderful...evocative and sexy. The away mission was just like an episode, even if the personal interactions were not. And now I need to go take a cold shower: your descriptions were so detailed!
I could really feel the oppresive heat. I loved how John made Rodney pay for his 'no touching' decree, but it was good to see Rodney turning the tables on him too. It's just a shame that rescue couldn't wait a few more minutes. Still there's that cold shower to imagine :). Laura.
Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2006 7:46 pm
Great story. Loved it. Thanks.
Reviewer: ikswo (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2006 5:20 pm
very well written! i loved your descriptions and how easy you made it to imagine all of this going on. beautiful imagery! and i second that hint-hint-nudge-nudge about the shower scene. *flutters eyelashes* please?
Reviewer: annajo (Anonymous)
08 Jul 2006 4:29 pm
I Have to say it....that was HOT! [like you didn't see that coming!] just so happens that we're topping the wrong side of 30 degrees here...made this fic even steamier! So...how about that shower scene...???