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Reviewer: roni (Anonymous)
03 Jul 2009 1:04 am
that was good was it all o'neil or was there a litle bit of shepard in there?
Reviewer: BobTheWraith (Anonymous)
13 Oct 2006 12:13 am
Your next chapter can be about technology. Its all great stuff but you don't talk much about the gate in chapter 1
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
20 Sep 2006 4:46 am
*gets self under control* Number 26! *promptly dies from fits of laughter*
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
20 Sep 2006 4:44 am
So, according to rules 10 and 13: Murphy's Law trumps Ockham's Razor? Lol, I loved this.
The Stargate Itself
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 10:36 pm
ROTFL!!!! And of course all of it is true. :) Love this story.
Reviewer: Ishtra Nalamanti (Signed)
17 Aug 2006 10:28 pm
#26 ought to have something about an exception being made for Daniel, who was married off to the daughter without even having a say in it. This is looking very interesting. When's more comming?

Author's Response: soon!
The Stargate Itself