Reviews For Begin Again
Awww, this was sweet, John realizing there was going to be something better for him in Atlantis. Love how Jack kinda nudged him into it-- I'm a sucker for fics where the two of them bond.
Nice. Great John and Jack characterisation, and a convincing continuation of that fateful discussion. Laura.
Reviewer: klostes (Anonymous)
18 Aug 2006 2:16 pm
Absolutely fantastic! Best tag for this scene yet. Both voices were spot on, and I could see and hear the entire thing playing out as I read it. Yes, Jack knows the fear and the rewards, and understands John's fears, exactly. Makes me wish that we could have some fics with John at the SGC working with Jack for a while. Bravo!
Reviewer: LouiseH (Anonymous)
18 Aug 2006 11:29 am
Absolutely flippin' wonderful ficlet.
Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingone (Anonymous)
18 Aug 2006 8:13 am
you know what i hate about this story??? that you indicate it is complete. you have just written the absolute best best flight john/jack story i have read to date. you captured everything and then some with this. you have both their voices down solid and you captured them perfectly. did jack nail john perfectly with why he doesn't want to go and why he must?! OH YEAH!! superbly written and shared. wow... just excellent. I love fic, I love thanking authors for fic and heck yes i go overboard on my enthusasim but if I like a story the author deserves to know it and you need to know I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Man oh man... read it twice already.
Reviewer: manic (Anonymous)
17 Aug 2006 11:08 pm
That was great. That scene definitely needed a tag. And I like how you point out the similarities between Jack and John.