Wraithbait

This is a bit of an odd story, because it feels like a continuation from another story. Is there a prequel? It deserves more then one review though, so here you go. I liked it. I didn't get it all, but I liked it.

I read the complete version on FF.net. I thought it was one of your best stories so far and showed great improvements from your early postings when I think you sometimes struggled a bit with keeping to your narrative. This was an original story that kept up the tension level and the characters were all portrayed very well. You did a good job and enjoyed reading it. Thanks for taking the time to write.