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Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
22 Aug 2006 1:44 am
"He told the two expedition members there -- both ATA carriers, with a heady scent like bacon -- to lock themselves in the conference room." I loved the story and all, but all I could think when I read this bit was about Bacon Guys 1 and 2 from 'The Storm'. Great story. Very chills-up-your-spine terrifying.

Author's Response: Actually, first I had 'microwave popcorn' for that line. I wanted a food smell that would attract people from far away. But I decided bacon was more appropriately serious. Anyway, I'm glad you were, um, chilled.
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Reviewer: sammy (Anonymous)
21 Aug 2006 11:26 pm
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, my poor rodney, turned into a wraith. i assume it was john that he killed? is there gonna be another chapter? that was too gud to end there!

Author's Response: Nope, that's it. Rodney killed John (wristband) and then used Ronon to commit suicide. The end. I'm glad to know you thought it was good, though!
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