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Reviewer: Tarlan (Anonymous)
11 Jul 2005 6:36 pm
Beautifully descriptive!
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Reviewer: Nixa Jane (Signed)
31 Mar 2005 3:45 am
You're quickly becoming one of my favorite writers. This was such a beautiful little scene, without being overly sentimental. Gorgeous imagery again, and lovely character interaction. Thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
22 Mar 2005 1:21 pm
Well, I'm not a writer, so I'm not intimidated by this story ;). I do agreee with Kalimyre though, about the way you've created such a detailed picture. Especially when you consider that it's actually all pretty much dark! The descriptions of the darkness, and what little bit of the environment they can pick out by the moon or fire light is really vivid in my mind. I liked the way that so much was said between John and Rodney, without them actually saying much at all, and we don't even get to see much of their thoughts, so it really is all down to just a few sentences. Very nicely done. Laura.

Author's Response: Hmm. Thank you. :) I do have a habit of describing places and forgetting characters ;) so I'm very glad that something of them came through there! Thank you, *again* again for dropping me a line!
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Reviewer: Kalimyre (Anonymous)
04 Mar 2005 8:06 pm
Oh holy hell, how do you do that? So gorgeous. I've heard of painting a word picture, but I don't think I've seen the concept illustrated so well before. The guys were clever and in character, the dialogue clean and minimal and just enough. The imagery was spooky and a little bit enticing, like it's scary but I want to go there anyway. Wow. I am very intimidated now, because jeez, how are the rest of us writers supposed to live up to that?

Author's Response: oh, please, please don't say "intimidated!" :) I'm glad you liked it, but don't say "intimidated!" *hides*
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