Wraithbait

ooooh, wicked! Just beautiful...

killer final sentence! beautiful!

Oh, this is just the sweetest tag for Irresistable I've read! It's so cute, and just left me smiling and giggling to myself. Thank you for sharing this one!

Oh I just love this. It's perfect.

Author's Response: Hee, thanks. :)

oh, this was clever! Too short, but only because I like long story, otherwise it was great!!! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: I'm one for longer stories, myself, and I have plenty in the works. Thanks for reviewing!

Oh, brilliant! I love the "ticking time bomb of righteous vengeance" line. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you, I think that's my favorite line, too. :)

eheheheheh! oh yeah, gotcha rodney.

Author's Response: Yep. He was kind of asking for it, just a little. :)

As Laura said, the last line changed ALL of it. For the better, I at least think. Wonderfully hot. Wonderfully smutty. Great, great!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think I made the right choice with the last line - if it wasn't for that, this fic would have gone places I definitely didn't want to go. :)

That last line made this fic, changed the context entirely. At first it was very hot, but morally suspect, and Rodney was right to feel a bit guilty. But that last line changed it into something much more amusing...and still hot. I could just imagine the bickering that came next as Rodney figured out he'd been had...in more ways than one :). Laura.

Author's Response: I tried to build the entire fic so the last line would change everything, so I'm glad you thought it worked. Though it was a pretty nasty trick John played on him - I'm pretty sure Rodney will let him have it. :)