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Reviewer: sueKay (Anonymous)
30 Apr 2006 2:34 pm
fantastic story...asbsolutely loved it...it was very sweet :) PLEASE say you're going to write a sequel!
Reviewer: dahan (Anonymous)
01 Sep 2005 4:46 am
That was exceptionally Sweet. Certainly funny and emotional if you read into all the bits and pieces. Loved it! Excellently written. Nice Job ^_^
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
09 Mar 2005 5:47 pm
Loved this story. So sad the girl had to go to the mainland. Loved a daddy Rodney, and a wannebe mommy Liz. Sequel? Oh and John makes a good not as funny as Rodney uncle.
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
05 Mar 2005 12:26 am
Awwww! What a sweet story! I agree with earlier comments that this could use a beta to fix some gramatical errors but other than that, fantastic! Poor Rodney *sniff* I wouldn't be opposed to reading a follow-up *hint hint* :D

Author's Response: HI I don't intend to do a follow up at the moment as i would like to work on some other fan fiction. But when i come up with an idea for a follow up i will write it. but i'm afraid it wont be any time soon. sorry Thanks for the review and i'm g;ad you liked it.
Reviewer: Purpleyin (Anonymous)
04 Mar 2005 9:23 pm
Ok, had lots of comments but very sleepy now. I found a number of spelling/grammar errors (the betreader in me just wants to point that out) but still quite liked the story, quite alot. Think it needs a good going over but everything that's there is very good. One thing I asn't sure aobut was Keira being 3? She seemed to talk lot older in most of it and it sort of spoilt it alittle. I admitt I don't have much experience with kids and so could be wrong but maybe you should make her 4 or 5 instead? I offer to betaread if you like and also would like to say that everyone over at the weirmckayship yahoogroup would love this story; you should post there!

Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review after i poted it i did actually think that she could talk really well for a 3 year-old and i will edit that she is 5 instead. I actalluy don't have anyone to betreader and i went through it myself to find errors, sorry that i missed any. If you wouldn't mind being a betreder for me it would be great to have another opinion before i post any other fan fiction.If that is okay with you. Can i just ask do you think that ending was a bit rushed?
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