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Reviewer: ellia (Anonymous)
18 Sep 2006 10:59 pm
read as far as part 5 , i liked it so far but heading into maryjane land, will carry on reading but charachters not revolving around 'fan' charachters are hard to handle , theres nothing to care about , whether melody lives or dies? has a rough day? its hard to care. this type of storytelling really only works when an original person is following an already well known charachter , ie POV of a charachter from an outsiders perspective thre is a fan in fanfiction ak
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