ROFL! I especially loved this:
"I'm sure you'll recognize the shade, seeing as its your mum's."
But the best bit was the end of it. They're so conniving. Thanks for sharing!
Reviews For Sparring
Oh how I wish I'd tried that in gym class...
Reviewer: jaws (Anonymous)
12 Dec 2006 2:17 pm
Reviewer: sueKay (Anonymous)
18 Mar 2006 2:35 pm
Fantastic :D Tumshie heid...LOL :D Being Scottish, I found this story to be refreshingly funny as your use of Scots was fantastic :D Most people get it wrong, but this was great :D
Reviewer: nonniemous (Anonymous)
08 Feb 2006 12:45 pm
Absolutely brilliant! Love the way the brilliant doctors outsmart everyone in the end. ;-)
Reviewer: Nymeria (Anonymous)
04 Sep 2005 4:36 am
The line about the mothers lipstick totally won.
*snort* I love the "you just had to go for the skirt" comment. I'm surprised more of us writers haven't tried that particular insult yet. ;-)
Reviewer: Fledge (Anonymous)
04 Feb 2005 1:29 pm
That was brilliant, really funny! I think the phonetics were necessary in that context, so well done. And well done the cunning doctors *G*