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Reviewer: Loldemort (Signed)
03 Oct 2006 10:35 am
Did John perhaps have a 'semi' at the end of that hug? When will chapter two be ready?
Reviewer: M (Anonymous)
05 Sep 2006 10:57 pm
More, pretty please?
Reviewer: jacqui (Anonymous)
02 Sep 2006 9:22 am
ok, so this is just the starting chapter right? It's good...but leaves you wanting more.
Reviewer: snicker (Anonymous)
02 Sep 2006 7:23 am
hehhehehee...maww It seems like that hug lasted for a while...I wonder why? hehehe But is was cute at the end. I will be watching for what happens next.
Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
01 Sep 2006 11:39 pm
Very nicely done. I could feel the frustration and angst w/ Rodney and John's caring. Well done. Perhaps you'll consider doing a follow up to take them to the next level as this is a great lead in.
Reviewer: tracy-thenaggingone (Anonymous)
01 Sep 2006 8:49 pm
Oh that was good so very very very good. A perfectly terrifying nightmare for Rodney and even just as friends, at this point in their relationship, I can see the hug between them. BRAVO!!!
Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
01 Sep 2006 2:41 pm
Very sweet.