Reviews For Not A Pretty Sight

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Reviewer: GBaby (Signed)
02 Apr 2007 3:18 pm
*diesfromlaugher* OMG! That was funny! I never thought somebody walking onto 'that' could be hilarious!! Great! Yours GB

Author's Response: Thanks GBaby. Yes, Zelenka was snickering for days.
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Reviewer: Loldemort (Signed)
03 Oct 2006 10:20 am
A laugh a line, just about. You captured Z's viewpoint very nicely, his reactions, his slightly eccentric English. The caterpillar simile was perfect. I think we needed this to be - oh - about twice as long, but no less concentrated :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
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Reviewer: Susan (Signed)
05 Sep 2006 12:21 am
There should be a whole genre devoted only to spoof stories that mock all of the usual M/S stories. You're will be the shining example. I LOVE!!! Go Radek

Author's Response: Ha. We'll have to start one. That would be quite a list. What else would you put on it?
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Sep 2006 8:38 pm
Heee. An different take on voyeur!fic, 'cause, yeah, as Radek thought, unless you're the one having it, sex really isn't all that attractive *g*. I had to laugh at Radek's inability to process 'Rodney' and 'babe' in the same sentence, 'cause again, yeah ;). Nad it was very evil of you to cut us off before we found out whether Rodney walked out on John's heels and the rumours started flying thick and fast *grrr* :). Laura.

Author's Response: Well, I'm going to assume that both the botanist and Radek will have moved before Rodney steps out. Fortunately for John, rumor has him sleeping with Elizabeth, Teyla, Lorne....
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Reviewer: Sharon (Anonymous)
03 Sep 2006 4:26 pm
That was unexpectedly hilarious! And how perfect to have Radek be the one to accidently discover them!! The description of the two - Rodney's white, white skin and the Major - oh, so much hair - had me lol! And Radek trying to process the words Rodney and Babe in the same sentence...that was wickedly funny. I could just see him running out and then collapsing into snickers like that. This was a terrific slash send-off - well done and cleverly, wickedly funny! THanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I could surprise you. We always assume that the voyeur is entranced with the lovely spectacle, but Radek? Not so much.
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Reviewer: SylvanWitch (Anonymous)
03 Sep 2006 6:13 am
You know, this is a wicked little story. Yes, it's humorous. And yes, it definitely takes a nice shot at slash writers everywhere, myself included (and I enjoy the laugh, too!), but it also very insidiously suggests that all is not going to remain alright in Atlantis, at least not for Sheppard and McKay. Wow. Nice "moment of last suspense" there. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I love it that you caught all the different layers of the story. Yeah, we all tend to have the voyeur as entranced as we are, but Radek was not so thrilled. A lot can happen as an upshot. The rumors could fly. Radek could lie to protect them. We have no idea. ;)
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Reviewer: LOL (Anonymous)
03 Sep 2006 4:06 am
The botanist goggled at Radek with bug-eyes, jaw dropping. Him? he mouthed, Dude, that was priceless!

Author's Response: Thank you. The botantist was floored, frankly.
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