John knew instinctively that it was Rodney crying out in pain, which meant that somebody was touching him ... and nobody got to touch Rodney without John’s permission. With an angered cry that became a howl, John managed to wrench one of the restraints free from the bed, looking up just as the marine collapsed to the ground unconscious. wow.. I love the premise. I hope there is lots more of this so I can read it soon. I know I@m just greedy that way. I've been secretly hoping someone would do a wolfish type bonding...but with the whole team? wow...just too cool. Thanks for sharing your work. Rayne
Author's Response: Oh theres more ... actually I don't see an end in sight at the moment :) thanks for the review.
Reviews For The Pack
Reviewer: Rayne (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 11:57 pm
Oh my! *eep* This is not good. Tense stuff and I can't wait to see what happens next. Who else will John go through, what will he and the team face when they return to normal, *will* they return to normal? Please update soon. Laura.
Intriguing start. It's both very hot and a bit disturbing to see John quite so possessive over Rodney :). Can't wait to see what happens next. Laura.
Reviewer: KatB (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 9:29 pm
Wow. What a great premise! Very compelling. More? Soon? Kat
Reviewer: mrsdrmckay (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 9:16 pm
Strangely compelling. I hope you write more of this for us.
Reviewer: Happy:) (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 8:07 pm
Dammit! This needs more:) They way the Linderians spoke about Liz,makes me think that they made her Pack, too:)
Reviewer: Asturiet (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 5:09 pm
Mmmmm....good stuff. A wonderful beginning.
Reviewer: justanotherfangirl (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 5:03 pm
This chapter was really interesting. I can't wait to see the way the rest of Atlantis reacts to this new development.
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous)
11 Sep 2006 4:55 pm
Loving this!!! - More please??