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Reviewer: Taylor (Anonymous)
14 Oct 2006 5:30 am
This is an awesome story Jo. You have quite a talent. Keep writing. You rock.
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 12:39 am
The poem is beautiful and really fits with the story. They would find paradise together.

Author's Response: thank you so much. i wrote the poem a couple of months ago and then i came up with an idea to make it into a story. i put the paradise part in there because i knew i wanted them to find each other even in death. thanks for reading and reviewing.
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