Reviews For Proxy
Wow. This was downright lyrical and so lovely it took my breath away. Then to have all that tie into the orange being the epitomy of things that Rodney cannot have...wow!
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous)
20 Sep 2006 1:10 am
*would type if she could, but is currently a puddle on the floor*
Wow.. I had never really thought of all those kinds of things to describe an orange.. but wow.. that was so good. I loved it.
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 6:50 pm
Ooooooh, peach flavoured John. :) Nice and leaves oh so much to the imagination.
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 5:55 pm
um uh WOW.....why has no one done this yet....wow...fricken genius idea
Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 4:56 pm
Lovely. Really well done. Thanks.
Reviewer: just1tearforme (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 3:32 pm
Nice, very Hemingway at times. I enjoyed the balance between eroticism, memory, and emotion. Can I assume that Rodney and the peach will follow as a sequel?
Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
19 Sep 2006 3:19 pm
that is one of the most erotic things I've ever read and it wasn't even overtly sexual, awesome writing! Loved it, now you gotta write Rodney eating the peach!