Reviews For Observing the Dynamic
I totally loved this. Loved how you wrote this from this OC's POV and just how well you did it! Very much one of my favorite stories ^^ I loved so many of the lines you used too! Like "I think maybe I am the only person who sees the Colonel take all of Rodney’s smiles and slip them in his pockets." Fwhee! So pwnful! ^-^
i absolutely adored this. you've captured all the small, completely realistic things that john and rodney would do with eachother, and i love that you painted it from someone elses point of view. there is so much love in this fic without being too sappy. its perfect :)
Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
22 Sep 2006 1:29 am
Beautiful story. Thanks.
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
22 Sep 2006 12:44 am
Wonderful character piece on Rodney and John. The observer would be Zelenka, I would guess. :) He's the only one who would think these things. Very warm. :)
Reviewer: ataraxis (Anonymous)
22 Sep 2006 12:31 am
I love this third person perspective into the dynamics of Rodney and John.
Wonderful story. I loved all the little details mystery!scientist (is it Radek? I can see Radek noticing details like this.) spotted about John and Rodney. SUch little things, so easily missed unless you take them all together. Very observant and uplifting, and so very them. Laura.