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Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
23 Sep 2008 12:44 am
This is GOOD! Hmmmmm, hmmmmmmm GOOD! I love how you have written John's POV. So cool! Thanks for writing this.
Chapter 4
Reviewer: IAmRightHere (Anonymous)
30 Oct 2006 5:09 pm
Just started this today. I must say that I'm enjoying the incredibly descriptive prose. Even though the story is gritty and grim (at this point, anyway), reading it is a pleasure because of how vividly the environment and John's feelings are described. I'm looking forward to reading more because I think things will turn around for John eventually. In the meantime, I'm totally into the nasty stuff.
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
22 Oct 2006 1:39 pm
A disconcerting list of injuries and a harrowing dream, but worth it for John's realisation that his friends would do anything for him, just as he would for them and that he wasn't alone anymore. Great ending. Laura.
Chapter 4
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
08 Oct 2006 6:03 am
Oh thank god, John's found his team alive and well and rescue is here to take him to Carson ::relieved grin::. I liked John's emotions here, the anger and pain warring with his feverish confusion, making him angry at his friends as much as Kolya, but then it just as swiftly fading back to relief. I wonder what they'll make of John's vendetta against Kolya- put it down to the fever, be amazed that John feels that much for them, or uneasy that John could so easily get into that frame of mind, out to track him down and kill him purely for revenge? can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Carson's standing by with the good drugs ;). Laura.
Not Alone - Chapter 3
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
01 Oct 2006 5:43 pm
*Eep*. But they're okay really, right? All just to psyche out John, right? They're looking for John, with a big rescue party full of marines, right? Right? ;). I just hope John gets to deal with Kolya, 'cause I'm feeling all bloodthirsty right now. And anyway, he needs that anger to keep him going, even if he doesn't get Kolya this time round. Laura.

Author's Response: LOL! Kolya can certainly bring out the bloodthirsty in us, can't he? I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
28 Sep 2006 7:10 pm
Great start. I liked the flashback to the start of the day and am looking forward to learning what happened to get John where he was. Great whumpage and typical stubborn survival from John. And Kolya's involved, so it's personal ::adds own feral grin to John's::. Looking forward to John sorting Kolya out once and for all and then going home to be fixed by Carson :). Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it. There's so much intensity between those two - and that was before CG! I'd love to see what happens the next time Kolya turns up. *returns Laura's feral grin*
Chapter 1
Reviewer: Suzette (Anonymous)
28 Sep 2006 2:14 pm
I really liked this and only have one tiny nitpick which is going to make me sound extremely nerdy: designating a destination with an 'M' instead of a 'P' means it's a moon and thus, John wouldn't need to worry about a moonlit night, since he was already on a moon to begin with.

Author's Response: All nerdy advice is welcome! Thanks for letting me know. I'll keep it in mind for the future. :D
Chapter 1
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