Reviews For Pretense

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Reviewer: Blucola (Anonymous)
19 Oct 2006 5:25 am
I enjoyed this story so well, I came back the next night and read it again. The description and angst were particularly lovely, but the bit that made me seek it out again was the description of the kiss. Really sweet, really hot. :)
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
30 Sep 2006 9:37 pm
Very hot and also quite sweet. I loved Rodney's determination to keep John with him and how he was careful not to spook John into bolting. I also liked this unsure, awkward John, so different to the cocky flyboy persona he presents to the outside world. Laura.
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
30 Sep 2006 1:26 am
That's sweet and lovely. :)
Reviewer: avira_jaden (Signed)
29 Sep 2006 11:32 pm
Oh! How much do I love this? Definitely one of the better "They have sex, but they both want more, and they have issues, and could you please stay the night" stories. The passage where you mention how Rodney gets to see the different John, I was like, yeah, that's it, that's totally how it is! Good balance between the smut and the angst and the tenderness. Particularly liked when John took off all his clothes, the slow, stumbling progression of their relationship. Good job! -Avira