Wraithbait

Heh, I was just wondering what would have happened had Teyla run into Rodney as he was doing the same exact thing she was when she was watching John and Chaya on the balcony (yay for run-ons!). "Fancy meeting you here!" Anyway, I really liked this. Teyla should put Rodney's drunk self to bed, go and meet John's incoming Jumper and give him a good ol' fashioned what for!

Author's Response: And that 'what for' should definitely involving smacking his bum again with those fighting sticks. :o)

Aww, that was really well written! Awesome job!

Author's Response: *beams* thanks! I'm really glad you liked the story. I know, awws to Rodney! *smacks John on the head with the clue stick*

Wonderful piece. You can feel Rodney's disappointment and Teyla's wanting to understand her new friends.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Oh, poor Rodney! At least he had Teyla there but it still makes me want to smack John for being so easily swayed by a pretty face.

Author's Response: I know; Rodney's the only pretty face he should be looking at. Teyla needs to smack some sense into him. Thanks for reading :o)

Lovely story. Poor Rodney. I'm not sure the last line makes sense though since they couldn't possibly see the jumper from that distance. Regardless, nice imagery. Any chance for a sequel? Your picture of Rodney is beautiful and should continue. :-)

Author's Response: Reading back I see your point about the jumper but I thought it sounded nice. Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked the story.