Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
All of the parts are so well in character, from Elizabeth's fond exasperation with what she sees as their immaturity, to Hermiod's confused attempts to work out human psychology. And the individual parts fit into a satisfying whole, that has so many little, homely details about Rodney and John's relationship (especially John's "stupid and not at all attractive hair" *g*).
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for such a comprehensive review - it's great to know what actually worked. Thanks. :D
Author's Response: I have a super-sekrit POV kink. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Author's Response: Always happy to make someone smile. Glad you enjoyed it.