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Reviewer: linzi (Anonymous)
05 Oct 2006 10:39 am
Wonderful. A really sensitive and sweet piece. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Reviewer: helva (Anonymous)
05 Oct 2006 10:02 am
I love the fact that Caldwell is the only one that really suspects what's going on, and that he's being very careful to not *know* anything. It makes a really good ending.

All of the parts are so well in character, from Elizabeth's fond exasperation with what she sees as their immaturity, to Hermiod's confused attempts to work out human psychology. And the individual parts fit into a satisfying whole, that has so many little, homely details about Rodney and John's relationship (especially John's "stupid and not at all attractive hair" *g*).

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for such a comprehensive review - it's great to know what actually worked. Thanks. :D

Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
04 Oct 2006 11:58 pm
*L* This is beautiful. :) Love all the different points of view.

Author's Response: I have a super-sekrit POV kink. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Reviewer: mercury973 (Anonymous)
04 Oct 2006 10:29 pm
Oh my. The 1st part with Elizabeth- funny! I could totally see that scene in my head when i read it. Thanks

Author's Response: Always happy to make someone smile. Glad you enjoyed it.