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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
08 Oct 2006 9:48 am
Typical! Rodney's mouth getting them in trouble again. I liked John's careful handling of the situation, knowing that Rodney's hostility was his way of coping and doing his usual trick of brushing it aside and getting Rodney to focus on the solution. Very hot, sweet too. Let's hope they have many more tims to do it again. Laura.

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Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous)
08 Oct 2006 9:17 am
I liked the beginning of the story, it was somehow funny and yet I could imagine Rodney to behave just like that. Asking a question that arises, without reflecting about the impact it could have on their mission. But you story would have been better, with an explanation how those people are supposed to know that Rodney was still a virgin. To have some more "emotional" stuff would not have hurt either, than heading directly for the hot stuff, which in itself was quiet good again.

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Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous)
08 Oct 2006 9:17 am
I liked the beginning of the story, it was somehow funny and yet I could imagine Rodney to behave just like that. Asking a question that arises, without reflecting about the impact it could have on their mission. But you story would have been better, with an explanation how those people are supposed to know that Rodney was still a virgin. To have some more "emotional" stuff would not have hurt either, than heading directly for the hot stuff, which in itself was quiet good again.

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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
08 Oct 2006 1:31 am
Hot and I love how gentle John was with Rodney. :)

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