Wraithbait

The words are so true. All of them. Nice job.

This was terribly sweet and I loved it. I also liked Rodney's comment to John about not being good with words.

Nice story, thank you for sharing. To be honest, it was curiosity that lead me to read it. If you had placed it under McKay/other or listed in the summary it was Lorne/McKay I'd have jumped at as I love McKay slash. Unique pairing, will be interested to see if you take it anyplace. Otherwise, as I said, nice story and thank you.